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[String Theory 2]

That level 20 took me a while, not even really sure how i beat some parts, great story, The ending especially had real emotion and has me interested in the sequel keep up the good work

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[Death By Ninja]

Dance Ninja Revolution Wooohoo fun game, good naration, inovative take on a simple system

[Fidget Spinner Zombie War]

it's alright at first. It's fun but the game is just too simple. More variety in the spinners would make this game great. Have the strongest one slide up and down in a column making timing important and a bit of chance that the zombie could get past it. You could have one that makes a zombie spin on top of it for a few seconds stopping them for a moment, I'd still have the purple be the same just low damage goes away right away; and one that spits out pellets from it's points every so many seconds would be cool. There's tons of stuff you could do, and more variety in the zombies would be nice. Make some weak fast ones, some heavy slow ones, have some with a shield that lets them bash through 2-3 spinners without damage. It's a good start but just having slightly different damage amount spinners, and the only variation in zombies being their health isn't fun for long. Also programming only the required amount of zombies needed to kill to win come out for each mission would be nice. It just doesn't feel like you accomplished anything when it says you won and there's still zombies on the screen. I'm not trying to give you a hard time like I said it's a decent game as it is; but you have a lot of room for improvement. I hope you take my criticism as constructive and not offensive

[Phantom Reverse #4]

This one was pretty good. You added some interesting supernatural and cryptic plot devices which are nice. I really like how you leave hints in the scenery of different locations. I really think this story has the chance to be your best one yet... Just thinking of all the details you could change with the use of time travel. You can have characters do a complete 180 in their
personality because they grew up; and something like, the future student council ruined their lives. In the form of a flashforward instead of a flashback This way you could have big twist from characters nobody suspects. This one has been great, all the details that developed in this episode. Julius's parents, now we know it was future Julius who saved them on the train. The cryptic message on the locket was cool i’m going to use the dial you showed in the textbook and use it on Juliu’s locket I hope there’s an easter egg here that would be soooo cool, but it’ll be just as interesting to find out that Julius’s parents had their own variation of the caesar cipher I’m really looking forward to the next one.

[Home]

Pretty good game. some parts were a little boring though. It'd be nice to have more decisions on missions. I think this game deserves close to a 5/5 but that's only if you plan on continuing this story if this is all there will be for this tale then it's kind of a let down

[Phantom Reverse #3]

This was awesome, the mystery behind julius has me hooked. It's nice to have some sort of and idea for why the student council is being picked off. The main character is kind of an idiot for trying to rob the one person who might be willing to help him. However it does make sense someone given 3 days to live would be willing to take any risk to survive. It's nice to see some flaws in the main characters personality, it makes him feel a lot more human and relatable. The design choices you choose have a lot of impact. From julius' half blood covered uniform in ep1, the scar covered eye of Ryan, the mothers tears, and the items you picked to decorate the supernatural club room. They're all detailed in really good quality, and really add to the story.

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! These first three episodes act as set up for a bunch of reveals later on. I wanted to give the main character a bit more character in this episode so that his character arc would have a bigger impact in the finale. Really excited to tell this story - lots of cool reveals and twists coming in the final 3 eps :-D

[Explore, Expand, Exploit!]

cool game kinda started to glitch a bit on me when the number of tiles got to a high amount, took a while for commands to be completed when i clicked on something. For those of you wondering about moving the explorer he can only move the number of tiles his range is from the center town you need to do more research to increase how far you can explore with him

[Phantom Reverse #1]

You've got me hooked, great story so far, and the art seems a bit better than the Blue Lights series. Only issue I have is that there isn't a replay the story button at the end which would be nice so we can play the story again and see how the different choices effect the events and dialogue in the story, and the main thing that bothers me; How does one read a newspaper in the rain? Don't you know a wet newspaper quickly bleeds the ink making it un-readable